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.The Feral Little Puma.

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A reference for Pumapaw/fang. I decided her warrior name will be Pumafang just cause :l

Anyway, as you can tell, I fail at cats. Persians especially. I seem to make characters out of things I can't draw.


Pumafang, artwork (c) :iconwolf-chalk:
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

As usual, I do like the picture, but let's start off with the downsides.
I do realize Puma here is of Persian descent, and should be fluffy and stocky, but it seems as if it's been a bit exaggerated here. The legs seem log enough, but the chest and belly too low. The chin juts out a bit too much, when it should be level, or slose to level with the upper part of the mouth. The eye seems a bit too small, and the ears too circular and fat. The tail also seems to be coming out at the wrong part of her body.
The paws are fine to me, though the front right seems a tiny bit unequal with the others. You captured her bushiness well, as well as the serious expression on her face. You also made the shoulders quite muscled, a trait seen in most Persians and persian-mixes. You also have the mashed in face, as the breed in ber bloodline in brachysiphalic.
Over all, this is well, done again, Lyre.